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Overall I really like the way you delivered the message in this story. I noticed a couple opportunities to make the story a bit more rational. I would expect the main character would spend some time gathering information to find out what caused the nuclear catastrophe so they can prevent it before they hit the reset. And as a smaller suggestion, I'd expect that they would also do some planning of who they'd need to coordinate with or how they'd get funds before they hit the reset. Not sure if there's a word limit but if you could find a way to work some of those things in I think it would be beneficial.

Are there any specific tools or methods you used to start an EA group in the Phillipines? I'm also interested in spreading the EA movement in emerging markets and would value any insight you have on this.